Damn the intro in itself is really good.... Your finest pad and chord work ever for sure. Some very nice melodies you have here too. There still is that distortion sound. Perhaps you are recording at too high of a level? I think that may be it. For just trying this out this shows that you have talent and an ear to create other genres. I have said this before in the past, but we have a lot of talent here on TIMGUL and almost every sound/style/genre to satisfy ones taste. We are doing things no one else in the world is. We are elite.... No one is doing it like we do and now you, Knowlesy are a part of this.